The Sales & Marketing Message Makeover (E-book)

Your Message Might Sound "Inspiring" But If It’s Not Converting, It’s Costing You.

Say goodbye to vague buzzwords and hello to bold language that sells. This free guide exposes the 10 lazy phrases that are sabotaging your brand (yes, even the “empower” one) and gives you the exact rewrites that grab attention, spark connection, and actually move people to buy.

Because clarity converts. And cute doesn’t cut it anymore.

The Hard Truth: Blending in is the Fastest Way to Get Ignored (and Stay Broke).
If your content sounds like everyone else’s, your results will too. This is about being more than inspirational. It’s about being intentional. And profitable.

Here’s what you’ll walk away with:

• 10 Overused Marketing Phrases (and why they’re turning your audience off)

• High-converting rewrites that actually say something

• Real examples of scroll-stopping videos that lead to DMs, not just likes

• Strategic swaps that sound like you - and sell like crazy

What You’re Probably Saying Right Now (and Why It’s Not Working):

❌ “I empower women to step into their purpose”
This sounds like every other IG coach with a vision board. It’s vague. It doesn’t tell us what you actually do, who you help, or how their life improves after working with you.

❌ “Helping you level up”
Level up what, exactly? Income? Confidence? Their skincare routine? You’re not a video game. Be clear. Be direct. Sell the transformation.

❌ “10x your business”
Unless you're Grant Cardone or joining his bro cult, this screams gimmick. It’s loud, it’s empty, and it kills trust with savvy buyers looking for real results.

🔥 Bottom line? If your message could be copied, pasted, and posted by 10,000 other businesses... it’s not converting.

This guide will show you exactly how to:

Rewrite it. Make it clear. Make it sell. Because sounding like everyone else? That’s the fastest way to get scrolled past, ghosted, and broke. Let’s fix your message before you post another piece of content that goes nowhere.

This is for the entrepreneur asking:

Why isn’t this message converting?

You’ve got the offer. The skills. The vision. But your content? Crickets. If you’re tired of getting likes instead of leads and “love this!” instead of “send the invoice,” this is for you.

• You’re a coach, creative, or service provider

• You know your sh*t - but your messaging is missing the mark

• You’re done spinning your wheels and  ready to start seeing the revenue come in

You’ve cleaned up the message. Now what? This guide is just the appetizer.

The next step is syncing your whole damn system so your marketing doesn’t just “look good,” but drives real sales. Because when your funnel and follow-up don’t match your fire content- you’re bleeding leads.